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Friday, August 23, 2019
why dogs are better than cats
this week in class we have been doing report writing I did my one on why
dogs are better than cats. if you had a favourite pet what would you choose
would you choose a dog or a cat?
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Do you have a dog? I do. He is a puppy. He is so naughty. I personally think that my cats are better than my doggy. Do you think that next time maybe you could add some more punctuation. (not trying to be mean)! I agree that they are much less lazy!! To add on to you 'dogs being helpful' Labradors can help tidy the house. My labrador will clean my room when he is older. Otherwise all that, your post is SOOOO GOOD!!!!!!!
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