Friday, June 12, 2020
giraffe report
hi, bloggers, my name is Kayla and I am from Marshland School
this week in lictrey we had to do a report on anything we like
I choose to do my report on giraffes because I found giraffes interesting
if you did a report what would you do it on?
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Hello Kayla,
ReplyDeleteYour Blog Post is a considerable way to inform people about Giraffes. You have constituted such inconceivable work. Your Report shows a lot of erudition and it also shows that you have been very focused. I like the way you systematized your work so that it is very easy for your readers to Navigate. Have you thought about the additional mechanisms to supplementary your writing, for example (A Summary and Conclusion) A Summary is a brief statement of the main points of something. A Conclusion is the last part of something, its end or result and its also used to introduce some final comments at the end of a piece of writing. How long did this Report take you to create? What format in writing did you use? What was the purpose of Writing a Report, and what made you realize you wanted to write about Giraffes, than any other Animal? I would also advise you to go back and edit your Report and determine that you are using your Capital Letters and Commas.
The Colours in your Report, are a great combination because it matches the format of your writing in the way of your presentation, although you could add some sources of Colour on Slides One And Two. With the addition of your Pictures you have used (Giraffes), I believe you should add the Sources and Image Attributions of where the Picture came from because you don't want be caught out for copy right and plagiarism. I also like the way your Presentation guides the readers in the point of direction that you want it to head to. Keep up the Great Work Kayla and keep progressing in your Learning.
Happy Blogging
Bella