Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Saturday, June 15, 2019
The Cosy Camper
This week in class we have been learning how to make the most unique tent you can ever imagine. I named mine the Cozy Camper if I have left anything out please comment what that isš
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Great Work Kayla,
ReplyDeleteThis is absoloutly amazing.
I really like the way that you added lots of great description in your piece of writing. Next time you could work on adding some more paragraphs and explain your thinking a bit more wisley.
Other wise great job
From Bella
Hi Kayla I really liked your tent I wish I could have your tent. Maybe you could change the 2016 background on your last slide.š±
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