Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, October 23, 2020
The Haunted House
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1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
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Hi my name is Layla from Ahipara School,
ReplyDeleteWow I am impressed you are great at it next time you can more slides and also maybe some more pictures
Hi I'm Tabby from Ahipara school your work is really good and cool! The thing I liked the most on your blog was probably the haunted house story because it had great description and details!
ReplyDeleteHello, my name is Samantha from Ahipara School. I loved this peace of writing but maybe next time you could tell us on how long it took or what your favorite part was. Other then that I loved your blog post and story. Blog ya later.
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