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Thursday, October 15, 2020

Why we should have a giraffe as a pet

 


Hi, my name is Kayla and I'm from Marshland School. This week in literacy we have been doing writing and I chose to write about why we should have a giraffe as a pet. We had 5 minutes
to choose what we were going to do, then we had 30 minutes to complete it. I really liked the ideas that I chose for wanting a giraffe.
Are you doing writing in literacy time and what on? 
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1 comment:

  1. AnonymousOctober 16, 2020 at 9:56 AM

    Hi Kayla! If I were your mum I would right away get you a giraffe. This is a great piece of persuasive writing. In literacy, we are doing narrative writing. I am really enjoying it.
    Here's a challenge.
    Try and make it it a little bit longer.
    From Lucy.
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